Let’s think through this step by step.
We’re being asked to imagine what John Gibson might say in the “Dear Mom” letter — but from his point of view, after he finds out his family survived the Indian attack. The original passage tells us:
- John was away at school when the attack happened.
- His mom (Elizabeth) and siblings were captured.
- He later found out they were alive — because a friend told him.
- He rushed home, helped rescue them, and then wrote this letter to his mom.
So now we need to write what John would say *after* knowing everyone is safe — not during the fear or uncertainty, but after relief and joy.
What would he feel? Probably:
- Relief that they’re okay
- Guilt for not being there
- Love and gratitude toward his mom
- Maybe even pride in how strong she was
He’d probably start with something like “Dear Mom,” then tell her how happy he is that she and the others are safe. He might apologize for not being there. He might thank her for staying brave. He might talk about how much he missed them or how scared he was when he heard the news.
Also, remember — this is a letter from a young boy (he was 13 at the time of the attack, so maybe 14 or 15 now). So the language should sound natural for a kid — not too fancy, but still respectful and heartfelt.
Let’s draft it simply:
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Dear Mom,
I can’t believe you’re all safe! When I heard the news, my heart stopped. Then when I found out you and the others were alive, I cried with happiness. I’m so sorry I wasn’t there to protect you. You were so brave — holding off those men, keeping everyone calm. I’m proud of you.
I ran home as fast as I could. Seeing you again made everything better. I’ll never leave you alone like that again. We’re going to be safer now — I promise.
Love always,
John
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That feels right. It’s emotional, personal, and fits what we know about John’s situation. He’s relieved, guilty, loving, and determined to do better next time.
Final Answer:
Dear Mom,
I can’t believe you’re all safe! When I heard the news, my heart stopped. Then when I found out you and the others were alive, I cried with happiness. I’m so sorry I wasn’t there to protect you. You were so brave — holding off those men, keeping everyone calm. I’m proud of you.
I ran home as fast as I could. Seeing you again made everything better. I’ll never leave you alone like that again. We’re going to be safer now — I promise.
Love always,
John
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of citing evidence from the text worksheet.
