Worksheet titled "Comma Splices and Fused Sentences - Exercise 1" with example sentences and multiple-choice answers.

The image shows a grammar exercise titled "Comma Splices and Fused Sentences – Exercise 1", where the student is asked to identify whether each sentence is a comma splice or a fused sentence. The student, Mira Lumb, has already completed the exercise and selected "B. fused sentence" for all three items.

Let’s go through each sentence carefully and analyze whether the answers are correct, explaining the reasoning.

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🔹 Definitions:

- Comma splice: Two independent clauses joined only by a comma (e.g., "I love cats, I hate dogs.").
- Fused sentence: Two independent clauses joined without any punctuation or conjunction (e.g., "I love cats I hate dogs.").

Both are grammatical errors, but they differ in how the clauses are joined.

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✔ Sentence 1:

> Julie is a real hypochondriac when her stomach hurts, she is certain that she has a bleeding ulcer; and if she has a backache, she believes that she has cancer of the spine.

Student's answer: B. fused sentence
✘ Incorrect

#### Analysis:
This sentence contains multiple independent clauses:
1. "Julie is a real hypochondriac"
2. "When her stomach hurts, she is certain that she has a bleeding ulcer"
3. "If she has a backache, she believes that she has cancer of the spine"

But note: The first clause ("Julie is a real hypochondriac") is followed by a comma and then another independent clause ("when her stomach hurts..."). This is a comma splice — two independent clauses joined only by a comma.

Also, the second and third parts are connected with a semicolon and "and", which is actually acceptable punctuation. However, the first part is incorrectly joined.

So, the main error is a comma splice between "hypochondriac" and "when her stomach hurts..."

✔ Correct answer: A. comma splice

> 💡 Fix: Use a period or a semicolon or add a conjunction.
> - *Julie is a real hypochondriac. When her stomach hurts, she is certain that she has a bleeding ulcer, and if she has a backache, she believes that she has cancer of the spine.*

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✔ Sentence 2:

> My cat Buster loves to nap on warm appliances when he sleeps on top of the television, his tail swipes the screen like a windshield wiper.

Student's answer: B. fused sentence
✘ Incorrect

#### Analysis:
- First clause: "My cat Buster loves to nap on warm appliances"
- Second clause: "When he sleeps on top of the television, his tail swipes the screen like a windshield wiper."

These are two independent clauses joined only by a comma after "appliance". That makes this a comma splice.

Even though "when he sleeps..." is a dependent clause, it's embedded in the second independent clause. But the main issue is that the two independent clauses are improperly joined by a comma.

✔ Correct answer: A. comma splice

> 💡 Fix:
> - *My cat Buster loves to nap on warm appliances. When he sleeps on top of the television, his tail swipes the screen like a windshield wiper.*
> - Or: *My cat Buster loves to nap on warm appliances; when he sleeps on top of the television, his tail swipes the screen like a windshield wiper.*

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✔ Sentence 3:

> During English class, Anthony kept flirting with RaShaunda because his behavior was keeping Shenicka from understanding the lecture, Shenicka whacked him over the head with her heavy dictionary.

Student's answer: B. fused sentence
✘ Incorrect

#### Analysis:
- First clause: "Anthony kept flirting with RaShaunda because his behavior was keeping Shenicka from understanding the lecture"
- Second clause: "Shenicka whacked him over the head with her heavy dictionary"

These are two independent clauses joined only by a comma. This is a comma splice.

Note: The phrase "because his behavior..." is a dependent clause modifying the first clause, but the entire first clause is still an independent clause. The second clause is also independent.

So, the structure is:
> [Independent clause], [independent clause]

➡️ That’s a comma splice.

✔ Correct answer: A. comma splice

> 💡 Fix:
> - *During English class, Anthony kept flirting with RaShaunda because his behavior was keeping Shenicka from understanding the lecture. Shenicka whacked him over the head with her heavy dictionary.*
> - Or: *During English class, Anthony kept flirting with RaShaunda because his behavior was keeping Shenicka from understanding the lecture; Shenicka whacked him over the head with her heavy dictionary.*

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✔ Final Corrections:

| Item | Student Answer | Correct Answer | Reason |
|------|----------------|----------------|--------|
| 1 | B. fused sentence | A. comma splice | Two independent clauses joined by a comma |
| 2 | B. fused sentence | A. comma splice | Independent clauses joined by a comma |
| 3 | B. fused sentence | A. comma splice | Independent clauses joined by a comma |

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📌 Summary:

All three sentences are comma splices, not fused sentences. The student incorrectly identified them as fused sentences.

A fused sentence would be something like:
> *"She studied hard she passed the test."* ← No punctuation at all.

But here, commas are used, so the errors are comma splices.

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✔ Corrected Answers:

1. A. comma splice
2. A. comma splice
3. A. comma splice

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