- The paragraph contains a factual error: jellyfish do not "evaporate" when exposed to the sun.
- Jellyfish are composed mostly of water (about 95-98%), which makes them gelatinous and transparent, but they do not turn into vapor like water does when heated.
- When washed ashore, jellyfish die due to dehydration, physical damage, or lack of oxygen—not evaporation. Their bodies dry out and decompose.
- The word "evaporated" is incorrectly used here; the correct concept is desiccation (drying out) or decomposition after death.
- The sentence “they get evaporated when they are exposed” is scientifically inaccurate and should be replaced with “they dry out and die when exposed.”
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of cursive writing paragraphs to copy.
