- Capitalize "When" at the beginning of the sentence.
- Change "her Father Mother and brothers" to "his father, mother, and brothers".
- Add a comma after "van".
- Change "Uncle alberto his fathers brother" to "Uncle Alberto, his father’s brother".
- Change "urn more money" to "earn more money".
- Change "right away?" to "right away."
- Change "He wouldn't be able to play in any of their games" to "he wouldn’t be able to play in any of their games." (lowercase 'h', add period).
- Change "eleven year old neighbor Roberto" to "eleven-year-old neighbor, Roberto".
- Change "axed him" to "asked him".
- Change "to her teacher?" to "to his teacher." (lowercase 't', change pronoun, change question mark to period).
- Change "The note explained about the move He wrote" to "The note explained about the move. He wrote".
- Change "I hope the team wins. as the van started" to "I hope the team wins.” As the van started".
- Change "off key singing" to "off-key singing".
- Change "Father Mother and brothers" to "father, mother, and brothers".
- Change "Take Me out to the ballgame" to "“Take Me Out to the Ball Game”".
- Change "Today, Eduardo wood listen" to "Today, Eduardo would listen".
- Change "but he knew he would someday play baseball again" to "but he knew he would someday play baseball again." (add period).
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of daily paragraph editing grade 5 worksheet.
