- Change "freedom" to "Freedom" (capitalized as it's part of the proper noun "Liberty Bell")
- Change "was made by the" to "was made by the" (no change needed; already correct)
- Change "it was rung." to "It was rung." (capitalize first word of sentence)
- Change "That is not a product." to "That is not a bell." (correct factual error — it’s a bell, not a product)
- Change "George Washington's birthday" to "George Washington’s birthday" (add apostrophe for possessive)
- Change "One over million people" to "Over one million people" (correct word order)
- Change "are visiting the bell each year." to "visit the bell each year." (subject-verb agreement: “people” is plural, so use “visit”)
- Change "It's a place called Liberty Bell Hall." to "It’s a place called the Liberty Bell Pavilion." (correct name of location)
- Change "It will range from its very first poke to a poke is the sound that holds the bell." to "It will range from its very first ring to the ring that holds the bell’s sound." (improve clarity and grammar)
- Change "A picture of the bell has been printed on coins and postage stamps." to "A picture of the bell has been printed on coins and postage stamps." (no change needed; already correct)
- Change "It is very special to see this piece of history." to "It is very special to see this piece of American history." (add “American” for specificity)
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of editing worksheet for 6th grade.
