You’re working on a worksheet titled
“Change the Simile to a Metaphor.” The goal is to rewrite each sentence so that the *simile* (which uses “like” or “as”) becomes a *metaphor* — a direct comparison that doesn’t use “like” or “as.”
Let’s go through each one:
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1. Simile:
She danced like she was floating on air.
➡️
Metaphor:
She danced as if she were floating on air.
*(Wait — that still uses “as if,” which is similar to “like.” Let’s fix it!)*
✔ Better metaphor:
She danced on air.
*(This removes “like” and directly states she is floating — implying weightlessness and grace.)*
Or even more poetic:
She was floating on air as she danced.
*(Still implies the metaphor without “like.”)*
✔️
Best answer:
>
She danced on air.
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2. Simile:
The waves crashed on the beach like charging horses.
➡️
Metaphor:
We need to remove “like” and make the waves *be* the horses.
✔ Metaphor:
>
The waves were charging horses crashing on the beach.
Or:
>
Charging horses of water crashed on the beach.
✔️
Best answer:
>
The waves were charging horses.
*(Short, powerful, and clearly metaphorical.)*
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3. Simile:
He was eating like he was shovelling cement into a mixer.
➡️
Metaphor:
Make him *actually* shoveling cement — not just “like” he is.
✔ Metaphor:
>
He was shovelling cement into a mixer.
*(This removes “like” and makes the action literal within the metaphor — implying his eating is heavy, mechanical, and forceful.)*
✔️
Best answer:
>
He was shovelling cement into a mixer.
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4. Simile:
Katie was as powerful as a train when she crossed the finish line.
➡️
Metaphor:
Make Katie *be* the train.
✔ Metaphor:
>
Katie was a train crossing the finish line.
Or:
>
A train crossed the finish line — it was Katie.
✔️
Best answer:
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Katie was a train at the finish line.
*(Simple, direct, and conveys unstoppable power.)*
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5. Simile:
James swam as gracefully as a dolphin.
➡️
Metaphor:
Make James *be* the dolphin.
✔ Metaphor:
>
James was a dolphin gliding through the water.
Or:
>
James swam like a dolphin. →
✘ No! That’s still a simile.
✔️
Best answer:
>
James was a dolphin in the water.
*(Emphasizes his grace and fluidity by identifying him with the dolphin.)*
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✔ Final Answers:
1.
She danced on air.
2.
The waves were charging horses.
3.
He was shovelling cement into a mixer.
4.
Katie was a train at the finish line.
5.
James was a dolphin in the water.
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## 💡 Quick Tip:
To turn a simile into a metaphor, simply:
- Remove “like” or “as”
- Make the comparison direct: “X is Y” instead of “X is like Y”
This creates stronger, more vivid imagery — which is exactly what metaphors are for!
Let me know if you want to turn these back into similes or practice more! 🐬🚂
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of metaphors similes worksheet.