- "Dear Carlos" should be followed by a comma: "Dear Carlos,"
- "It isnt really new." should be corrected to: "It isn't really new."
- "Bennys bike" should be: "Benny's bike"
- "joes bike shop" should be: "Joe's Bike Shop"
- "east harlem" should be: "East Harlem"
- "christmas" should be capitalized: "Christmas"
- "I didnt get one." should be: "I didn't get one."
- "Wasnt he nice to do that?" should be: "Wasn't he nice to do that?"
- "Sean before he moves to new jersey." should be: "Sean before he moves to New Jersey."
- "Seans bike" should be: "Sean's bike"
- "dell computer" should be: "Dell computer"
- "Hes upset" should be: "He's upset"
- The closing "Your Friend" and "Pedro" should be on separate lines, with "Your Friend" followed by a comma or left as is for informal letters.
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of paragraph correction worksheets.