1. "Once there was a proofreader who was very, very lazy, he forgot capitals at the beginnings of sentences." → Add comma after "lazy" for correct punctuation.
2. "He forgot commas, periods, and other types of punctuation." → No error.
3. "He even forgot to correct spelling errors." → No error.
4. "Sometimes he even forgotten to fix grammar mistakes." → Change "forgotten" to "forgot" for correct past tense verb form.
5. "When people told the proofreader about his mistakes, he said, 'So what? What could possibly happen from a few proofreading errors?'" → No error.
6. "One day the proofreader was proofreading a recipe for bagels." → No error.
7. "The recipe was supposed to call for 14 ounces of yeast." → No error.
8. "But the proofreader's mistake said 14 pounds of yeast." → Add comma after "mistake" for clarity: "But the proofreader's mistake, said 14 pounds of yeast."
9. "Well, wouldn't you know it, the proofreader wandered into a bagel store next day." → Add "the" before "next day": "next day" → "the next day".
10. "This was just after the bagel baker had added 14 pounds of yeast instead of 14 ounces." → No error.
11. "'I'll have one poppy seed bagel,' said the proofreader." → No error.
12. "Suddenly, the bagels explode." → Change "explode" to "exploded" for correct past tense.
13. "The proofreader got hit by a flying bagel." → No error.
14. "In fact, it stuck to his nose!" → No error.
15. "At the hospital, the proofreader asked the doctor, 'Why you laughing?'" → Change "Why you laughing?" to "Why are you laughing?" for correct grammar.
16. "'I'm sorry,' the doctor said. 'I've never seen a bagel stuck to somebody's nose before. How did it happen?'" → No error.
17. "The proofreader told the story while the doctor extracted the bagel." → No error.
18. "Today, his nose is as good as new." → No error.
19. "He's also a much better proofreader." → No error.
20. "Now he realizes what can happen from just one small mistake." → No error.
Corrected errors:
- Sentence 1: Add comma after "lazy".
- Sentence 4: Change "forgotten" to "forgot".
- Sentence 8: Add comma after "mistake".
- Sentence 9: Add "the" before "next day".
- Sentence 12: Change "explode" to "exploded".
- Sentence 15: Change "Why you laughing?" to "Why are you laughing?"
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of printable proofreading exercises.