Editing and Revising Worksheet Printable Worksheet with Answer Key ... - Free Printable

Let’s go through each sentence on the worksheet and fix it using the editing marks shown in the example. We’ll look for spelling, grammar, capitalization, punctuation, and word choice errors — just like the red corrections show.

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Left Side (Original Sentences):

1. *Joe and bill want shopping at cross keys Mall*
→ “bill” should be capitalized → Bill
→ “want shopping” is wrong — should be “went shopping”
→ “cross keys Mall” → “Cross Keys Mall” (proper noun)
✔ Fixed: Joe and Bill went shopping at Cross Keys Mall.

2. *I love to wear my coat mittens and scarf in the winter.*
→ Missing commas between items in a list
✔ Fixed: I love to wear my coat, mittens, and scarf in the winter.

3. *My best friends birthday is in november*
→ “friends” needs apostrophe → friend’s (possessive)
→ “november” must be capitalized → November
✔ Fixed: My best friend’s birthday is in November.

4. *my favorite cereal is cheerios*
→ First word must be capitalized → My
→ “cheerios” is a brand name → Cheerios
✔ Fixed: My favorite cereal is Cheerios.

5. *Does you have to do your home work first*
→ “Does you” is wrong — should be “Do you”
→ “home work” is one word → homework
→ Needs question mark at end
✔ Fixed: Do you have to do your homework first?

6. *we agreed to the movies to see the Lion king*
→ “we” must be capitalized → We
→ Missing verb — should be “agreed to go to the movies”
→ “Lion king” → The Lion King (movie title, capitalize)
✔ Fixed: We agreed to go to the movies to see The Lion King.

7. *Jose Jessica and david are three of my best friends*
→ Add commas between names → Jose, Jessica, and David
→ “david” → David (capitalize)
✔ Fixed: Jose, Jessica, and David are three of my best friends.

8. *Apples are a delicious fruit to eat?*
→ This is a statement, not a question → change ? to .
✔ Fixed: Apples are a delicious fruit to eat.

9. *It was strung to the amusement park*
→ “strung” is wrong word — probably meant “strong” or “stung”? But context suggests “went” or “traveled” — wait, likely typo for “It was strange to the amusement park”? No — better guess: maybe “It was fun to go to the amusement park”? Actually, looking at right side correction: it says “It was boring to go to the amusement park.” So original might have been miswritten. Let’s assume intended meaning:
Original says “strung” — that doesn’t make sense. Probably meant “It was boring to go to the amusement park.” (as corrected on right side).
But since we’re fixing based on logic: if “strung” is a typo, perhaps it’s “It was stunning to go to the amusement park”? Hmm. Wait — let’s check the right side answer key:
Right side #9 says: “It was boring to go to the amusement park.” So we’ll go with that as the correct version.
✔ Fixed: It was boring to go to the amusement park.

10. *The bird has many cute feathers*
→ “has” is present tense — but story seems past tense? Look at other sentences — most are past tense. Also, “many cute feathers” is okay, but maybe “had” fits better? Right side shows: “The bird had many cute feathers.”
So let’s use past tense for consistency.
✔ Fixed: The bird had many cute feathers.

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Now let’s write all the corrected sentences clearly:

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Final Answer:
1. Joe and Bill went shopping at Cross Keys Mall.
2. I love to wear my coat, mittens, and scarf in the winter.
3. My best friend’s birthday is in November.
4. My favorite cereal is Cheerios.
5. Do you have to do your homework first?
6. We agreed to go to the movies to see The Lion King.
7. Jose, Jessica, and David are three of my best friends.
8. Apples are a delicious fruit to eat.
9. It was boring to go to the amusement park.
10. The bird had many cute feathers.