Examples of replacing wordy clauses with concise phrases to improve writing clarity.

Slide showing examples of replacing wordy clauses with phrases in writing, including "When the play had come to an end, we walked to a restaurant and treated ourselves to pizza" revised to "After the play, we walked to a restaurant and treated ourselves to pizza," and "I ordered a slice with mushrooms, which are my favorite topping" revised to "I ordered a slice with mushrooms, my favorite topping."