- Change "freedom" to "Freedom" (capitalization).
- Change "it was used by american" to "It was used by American" (capitalization).
- Change "200 years ago" to "over 200 years ago" (add "over" for accuracy).
- Change "it was made from staked like tin and copper" to "it was made from stacked tin and copper" (correct spelling and phrasing).
- Change "the bell was cracked for the first time it was ring" to "the bell was cracked the first time it was rung" (correct verb tense and remove unnecessary "it").
- Change "it is no longer is rang" to "it is no longer rung" (remove redundant "is").
- Change "That is to protect it" to "This is to protect it" (correct pronoun reference).
- Change "One over million people are visiting the bell each year" to "Over one million people visit the bell each year" (correct word order and verb tense).
- Change "It’s a place called liberty bell hall" to "It’s a place called Liberty Bell Hall" (capitalization).
- Change "It still hangs from its very first pole" to "It still hangs from its original pole" (more accurate phrasing).
- Change "a poke is the sound that holds the bell" to "a peal is the sound of the bell" (correct word choice).
- Change "A picture of the bell has been printed on coins and postage stamps" to "Images of the bell have been printed on coins and postage stamps" (more accurate phrasing).
- Change "It is very special to see this peace of history" to "It is very special to see this piece of history" (correct spelling).
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of 4th grade revising and editing practice worksheet.
