To correct the letter, we need to look for three things:
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Capitals: Names of people, places, brands, days, months, and holidays always start with a capital letter. The first word of every sentence also needs a capital letter.
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Apostrophes: These are used when words are shortened (contractions like *isn't*) or to show ownership (possessives like *Benny's*).
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Commas: These are often used after the greeting in a letter (like "Dear Carlos,").
Here is the step-by-step correction:
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"Dear Carlos" → Needs a comma at the end because it is a greeting. ->
Dear Carlos,
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"It isnt really new." → "Isnt" is short for "is not," so it needs an apostrophe. ->
It isn't really new.
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"Bennys bike" → The bike belongs to Benny, so we add an apostrophe + s. ->
Benny's bike
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"schwann" → Schwinn is a brand name, so it needs a capital S. ->
Schwinn
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"joes bike shop" → Joe is a person's name, so it needs a capital J. Also, the shop belongs to Joe, so it needs an apostrophe. ->
Joe's bike shop
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"east harlem" → This is a specific place (a neighborhood), so both words need capitals. ->
East Harlem
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"christmas" → Holidays are proper nouns and need a capital C. ->
Christmas
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"didnt" → Short for "did not." Needs an apostrophe. ->
didn't
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"Wasnt" → Short for "was not." Needs an apostrophe. ->
Wasn't
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"new jersey" → This is a state name, so both words need capitals. ->
New Jersey
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"Seans bike" → The bike belongs to Sean. Needs an apostrophe. ->
Sean's bike
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"dell computer" → Dell is a brand name. Needs a capital D. ->
Dell computer
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"Hes upset" → Short for "He is." Needs an apostrophe. ->
He's upset
Final Answer:
Dear Carlos,
I am writing to tell you that last week I bought a new bicycle. It isn't really new. It used to be Benny's bike, but he bought a new Schwinn at Joe's bike shop in East Harlem. Benny knew I had asked for a bike for Christmas, but I didn't get one. Wasn't he nice to do that? Now I can give my old bike to Sean before he moves to New Jersey. Sean's bike was stolen last month along with his Dell computer. He's upset, and I know this will make him happy! Talk to you soon!
Your Friend,
Pedro
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of correcting paragraphs worksheet.