1. "guppies, tetras, and a tiny shark inside" should be "guppies, tetras, and a tiny shark." (Remove "inside" as it's redundant with "in the tank" later).
2. "Also, there are three snail" should be "Also, there are three snails" (Correct subject-verb agreement; "snail" to "snails").
3. "A frog named flipper also live in the tank" should be "A frog named Flipper also lives in the tank" (Capitalize proper noun "Flipper"; correct verb to "lives").
4. "but he usually hide under the rocks" should be "but he usually hides under the rocks" (Correct verb to "hides" for third person singular).
5. "It’s fun to watch all the different creatures in mt tank" should be "It’s fun to watch all the different creatures in my tank" (Correct typo "mt" to "my").
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of editing paragraphs worksheet.
