1. "president" should be capitalized to "President".
2. "change" should be "changed" to match the past tense.
3. "countries" should be "country's" to indicate possession.
4. "men a women" should be "men and women" for correct conjunction.
5. "there" should be "their" to show possession.
6. "United States" should be followed by a period or comma before "Every year".
7. "Every year on this day" should not be capitalized mid-sentence; change to "every year on this day".
8. "exact" should be "exactly" to modify the verb "held".
9. The phrase "the fighting in World War I" is redundant; remove "the fighting" or rephrase to "the end of World War I".
10. A period is missing at the end of the paragraph.
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