Let’s read the paragraph carefully:
> There are over 11,000 different species of grasshoppers found all around the world. Grasshoppers are similar to other insects in that they have a head, a thorax, an abdomen, and six legs. Their back legs are especially large, which helps them jump more easily. They also have two pairs of wings.
Now, let’s break it down into key points so we can rewrite it in our own words:
1. Over 11,000 kinds of grasshoppers exist worldwide.
2. Like most insects, they have: head, thorax, abdomen, and 6 legs.
3. Their back legs are big — this helps them jump well.
4. They have 2 pairs of wings (so 4 wings total).
Now, let’s put those ideas together using different words — but keep the same meaning.
We don’t need to copy any phrases exactly. We can say “types” instead of “species,” “found everywhere” instead of “all around the world,” etc.
Also, remember: paraphrasing means saying the same thing in your own way — not changing the facts!
Let me try writing it now:
There are more than 11,000 types of grasshoppers living across the globe. Like many other bugs, they’re made up of three main body parts — head, middle section (thorax), and rear part (abdomen) — plus six legs. Their hind legs are extra strong and long, letting them leap far. Plus, they’ve got four wings — two sets!
Wait — is “middle section” clear enough for “thorax”? Maybe better to just say “thorax” since it’s a science word students might know. Or maybe explain it simply? Let’s check the original — it says “thorax” without explaining, so we can use it too.
Revised version:
More than 11,000 kinds of grasshoppers live all over Earth. They share basic insect features: a head, thorax, abdomen, and six legs. Their powerful back legs help them jump high and far. Also, they have two pairs of wings — that’s four wings altogether!
That sounds good. It keeps all the facts, uses simpler or different wording, and flows naturally.
Final Answer:
More than 11,000 kinds of grasshoppers live all over Earth. They share basic insect features: a head, thorax, abdomen, and six legs. Their powerful back legs help them jump high and far. Also, they have two pairs of wings — that’s four wings altogether!
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of paraphrasing worksheet for middle school.