- "Paul revere" should be capitalized as "Paul Revere".
- "January 1 1735" should include a comma: "January 1, 1735".
- "he were" is grammatically incorrect; it should be "he was".
- "is sent" is in the wrong tense; it should be "was sent".
- The sentence "that the British were coming He stop at every house to warn they" is missing punctuation and has grammatical errors. It should be: "that the British were coming. He stopped at every house to warn them."
- "hoarses" is a misspelling; it should be "horses".
- "All 3 men" should be written as "All three men" for formal writing.
- "but Hancock and Adams were safe" is unclear — it implies only two were safe, but the prior sentence says all three were arrested. This contradiction needs correction. If all three were arrested, then “but Hancock and Adams were safe” is factually wrong. If only Paul Revere was arrested, the sentence should read: “but Hancock and Adams escaped.”
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