- Capitalize "My" in "My sister and brother" to start the sentence correctly.
- Add a period at the end of the paragraph after "peace and quiet!" to complete the sentence.
- Add a question mark after "Talk about a full house!" since it is an exclamation that functions as a rhetorical question.
- Take out or correct "had to keep her for all summer" — change to "had to keep her all summer" (remove "for" as redundant).
- Spell "sister" correctly — currently written as "siter".
- Lowercase "I" in "I talk" to "i" — incorrect capitalization mid-sentence.
- Add a comma after "because I need some space" to separate the independent clause from the following phrase.
- Add a comma after "peace and quiet!" to properly punctuate the list before the conjunction "and".
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of proofreading worksheet for middle school.
