Let’s look at the paragraph that needs fixing:
> we went to the library yesterday there were many good books i picked a book about dogs my sister liked the book about stars we stayed for a long time we read our books when we got home
This is one big run-on sentence. We need to break it into separate sentences by adding periods and capital letters at the start of each new sentence.
Step 1: Find where each idea ends.
- “we went to the library yesterday” → This is one complete thought.
- “there were many good books” → Another complete thought.
- “i picked a book about dogs” → Another one.
- “my sister liked the book about stars” → Another.
- “we stayed for a long time” → Another.
- “we read our books when we got home” → Last one.
Step 2: Add a period at the end of each sentence, and capitalize the first letter of each new sentence.
Also, remember: “I” (when talking about yourself) should always be capitalized — even in the middle of a sentence.
So let’s fix it:
Original:
we went to the library yesterday there were many good books i picked a book about dogs my sister liked the book about stars we stayed for a long time we read our books when we got home
Fixed version:
We went to the library yesterday. There were many good books. I picked a book about dogs. My sister liked the book about stars. We stayed for a long time. We read our books when we got home.
Check:
✔ Each sentence starts with a capital letter.
✔ Each sentence ends with a period.
✔ “I” is capitalized correctly.
✔ All ideas are now separated properly.
Final Answer:
We went to the library yesterday. There were many good books. I picked a book about dogs. My sister liked the book about stars. We stayed for a long time. We read our books when we got home.
Parent Tip: Review the logic above to help your child master the concept of worksheet on punctuation and capitalization.